30 July 2010

sultry

perfectly still
window open
moisture beads
trails down waist
slight breeze
stirs sigh
fingers trace
rivulets
curved hip
head moves
whistles cool
salty streams
shiver still

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Thank you to Poets United for the prompt. Visit the link for an assault on your sultry sensibilities. ha!

6 comments:

jinksy said...

Steamy! :)

Gordon Mason said...

Well written - no wasted words.

Mary said...

Excellent...creates the mood, leave details to reader's imagination!

Jingle said...

hot!

Diane T said...

Well written with just the right amount of steam!

flaubert said...

Wow Brenda I know what is on your mind! ;)
beautiful and I agree no wasted words at all!
Pamela