12 July 2010
Magpie Tomato Lune
iron vines cling tight
until rot
liberates spent fruit
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Shout out to Magpie Tales for the picture prompt. Check out the link for creative takes on the picture.
Thank you to Robert Lee Brewer of Poetic Asides for his description of the lune. “The lune is also known as the American Haiku. It was first created by the poet Robert Kelly (truly a great poet) and was a result of Kelly's frustration with English haiku. After much experimentation, he settled on a 13-syllable, self-contained poem that has 5 syllables in the first line, 3 syllables in the second line and 5 syllable in the final line.”
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13 comments:
nicely done! Iron vines they are indeed!
Great haiku... well done
Christine
a very truthful lune!
Great Haiku....bkm
9 simple words tell a complete story!
Nicely done! I like your lune...
i ike those iron vines but will do my best to get to them before they rot...smiles. nice magpie
Fun to see a haiku twist. I love the simplicity. Nicely written!
Few words producing wonderful Magpie!
You spelled linearity in time guite beautifully. :)
Wonderful! Thanks for the background on the "lune".
lovely Haiku!
cool! well said!
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