for Len Never in that dream of dreams childhood sent my nighttimes to, did I imagine You, my love. Even as gray shoots through your dark outrageous curls certain brown eyed glances bring instantaneous moistening and we relinquish our day to the bedroom faire l’amour. You become my dark prince and trusted stallion— rider and horse as one. In the morning, tethered to fields of rich dark coffee, my tongue follows a sweet dark rivulet from pain au chocolat up the long slow curve of your succulent chin.
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A big thank you to Rallentanda at POW. This piece would not have come without her prompt. "Write a poem in the style of Prevert with some French sprinkles. Please provide a translation if you are going to use big chunks of French .I look forward to some very varied and interesting poems next week. A toute a l'heure."
I read several translations of Jacques Prevert's poems before writing my own. I wanted to write a piece that included coffee and love. ha!
13 comments:
Beautiful, sensual poem, Brenda! To love ... and to coffee!
You only sprinkled the French words, but this post is full of French passion.
Quite the passionate piece Brenda!
Pamela
Fine poem. Loving and sexy.
Very sexy, and French in spirit.
Dark and sensual...two things that definitely work well with love and coffee. Stir that up with a dollop of French - pure yum.
- Dina
Brenda, I can definitely tell you read a lot of Prevert before writing, as you got into the style so well...and, as Stan said, the French passion!
Great work, Brenda! Definitely French style love-making, lol. Especially that river of chocolate on his chin, tee hee.
Bet Len loved this,especially now he is immortalised in verse and known internationally as a hottie! Loved this Brenda. When it comes to 'faire l'amour' the French get gold! Beautiful poem.
PS
Say hello to Hazel!
Ok. What I would like to see is some chocolate drizzled across his chest, maybe some ice cream shared between the two of you from one spoon at one time, and perhaps throw in some whipped cream. Yes, whipped cream. =)
Seriously -- a beautiful and sensuous piece, just French enough to be subtle, not pretentious, and wonderfully and frankly in love. Thanks.
Rall--I love your prompts because I can post Tuesday night in Montana, and wake up to a plethora of positive comments on Wednesday. (I'll let Len know about his updated international status!) You also get me writing things that may not come otherwises. Hazel says Meow.
Linda, Love lives in my life. Never thought it could be so strong. woo hoo! Whipped cream is always delightful.
Thank you all for reading and commenting, my morning is shining through all the dark clouds outside.
It's good to know such passion still exists in the world :). I love the last stanza.
bien fait Brenda
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