08 May 2010

The Eyeball


It lives in the briny deep sea
its visions filter to me
every day with no notion
scenes from the ocean
enter my mind’s eye debris.


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Magpie Tales supplied the unique prompt.

15 comments:

Catalyst said...

A limerick! I love limericks! I love this one!

brenda said...

Thank you Catalyst! You just made my day. I wasn't sure about this one. :)

A Blogoddess' Tale said...

you caught my attention with this one. done so well with few lines! :)

Helen said...

I loved your words and I loved the way there were positioned perfectly beneath the photo! It just all worked!!!

Brian Miller said...

there is just something about the sea...my eyes long to see. nice magpie!

joanny said...

A perfect limerick to go with this photo prompt -- I love the way your words flow so easily together.

Joanny

sheri... said...

very unusual but i liked it so much! your magpie left me with such a soothing sensation but i didn't want to touch the bottom! excellent post :)

hoff said...

Excellent job- fantastic picture too

willow said...

This was fun to read out loud!!

Lyn said...

It seems like a nursery rhyme..very good!

Tumblewords: said...

Oh, this is wildly clever!

Jingle said...

pleasant tale!
beautiful images!

pieceofpie said...

oh to see the bottom of the sea.....

brenda said...

Thank you all for reading and commenting on The Eyeball. I look forward to the next Magpie, to see what we all conjure from the depths. :)

Marinela said...

A lovely limerick to go with this images :)