Cheryl’s constant attack on the others 
made wringing her neck easy.
That left sweet Sheila, Gita, 
funny little Francis, and Mabel.
Yadi did not have the heart for more slaughter.
Gita’s eyes held reproach,
Francis ran circles round his feet, and
Sheila shuddered on the passenger seat.
Screeching, Mabel charged Yadi. 
She was the next to go.
Grabbing Mabel’s neck,
Yadi stepped from the bus
and wrung it.
Two down, three to go.
Five years earlier Randy, Jim and Pryor
converted Phil’s old VW bus 
into a coop for chickens-
one named for each roomate's mother.
Since that day, Randy and Yadi 
turned cooking eggs into art.
Every day the men devoured eggs.
Strata, soufflés, quiche, and frittatas
scrambled, over easy, and baked.
When the city condemned their house, 
they chose to make a meal of their momma hens.
Randy, Jim, and Phil held the three remaining girls.
Yadi and Pryor sang a whacked out version 
of the Ozark Mountain Daredevil’s 
Chicken Train 
while three necks twisted then
simultaneously snapped.
The men settled in to plucking the birds 
and telling tales
about these five feathered friends.
Too much wine with dinner 
led to turn-taking 
with sledge hammers 
to bash the bus in.
Randy squawked 
a fine imitation of Francis, 
flapping his arms 
and dancing circles 
through their yard.
Yadi chanted and started a fire in the pit.
The five of them sat
facing flame, feeding it,
filling it with wood and stories,
watching one another 
drum the earth
until dawn 
colored the edges 
of the sky.
Ten days later, 
right before dusk, 
the fire department 
burned their house
to the ground. 
From across the street, 
the men watched it disappear.
Yadi said, 
“If I was God, 
I would be fire.
Fire keeps people humble.
Fire leaves only ash.
Fire annihilates with no remorse.”
Then his voice broke.
Yadi grabbed his head in both hands and said,
“I cannot tell my mother I ate Gita for dinner.”
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This is a (mostly) true story.  When the Big Tent asked us to revise a piece, I went straight to Urban Chickens.  It didn't require a huge revision.  I played with line breaks, changed the phrasing a bit, and did some general polishing. 
Head over to 
Big Tent Poetry and take a gander at some more poems that were revisited this week by their constructors.