02 August 2010

Microfiction Monday #42



AJ promised me that the new house would be perfect. Yeah, if I were a deer.





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This is my first post at Microfiction Monday.  Visit the link for a plethora of delightful takes on the prompt.

15 comments:

anthonynorth said...

Nice one. MM can be great fun.

brenda w said...

Thanks Anthony. I'll come back next week, too! ~Brenda

SparkleFarkle said...
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SparkleFarkle said...

Maybe AJ got "deer" and "dear" confused. LOL!
SparkleFarkle~~~~~*

jabblog said...

Perfect is as perfect does - it's all in the perception ;-)

Ellie said...

LOL. That AJ was a liar. Great microfiction.

Your blog header picture is stunning! I love photographs taken at unusual angles or different perspectives.

Jingle said...

love the idea that if you were a deer, then it is perfect.

beautiful and witty.

Pat said...

Do I detect a note of sarcasm?, as my mother used to say. Hilarious.

K said...

too too funny! and too true.
well written.

Judy Sheldon-Walker said...

And you aren't? :-) Just teasing. Brenda, there are lots of sites to write for pay. I have a few posted in my side bar. I love writing and simply cannot get enough.

Thanks so much for your visit and God bless!

hope said...

I'm betting the raccoons move in first. :)

Susan at Stony River said...

Have fun decorating, Bambi! ROFL
I think Sparkle may have the answer --
;-)

Sylvia Morice said...

I think you're right! If you were a deer you'd likely love to have a place of your own. Good job!

ninotaziz said...

Now watch out for the fairy godmother...she might drop by to grant the wish!

Bill ~ {The Old Fart} said...

I can only Imagine what AJ was promised in return. Welcome to MfM, will look for your post next week.