tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post8857931571320657897..comments2023-10-10T10:41:08.501-06:00Comments on Beyond the Bozone: mother me a meteorbrenda whttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-27181453810001362052011-06-03T19:51:43.648-06:002011-06-03T19:51:43.648-06:00Very good and very interesting too.Very good and very interesting too.Cathyhttp://thequietone.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-85675747729860175172011-05-31T23:08:15.178-06:002011-05-31T23:08:15.178-06:00Brenda, the motion and emotion in this is amazing....Brenda, the motion and emotion in this is amazing. I love that opening, "turning against her / striding self" - and how she "dreams herself a meteor" - how you make falling a beautiful thing, a release, a break from motion.<br /><br />RichardMr. Walkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05507517064398624652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-55939315147296925332011-05-31T06:32:50.355-06:002011-05-31T06:32:50.355-06:00I found this one difficult, but with a little more...I found this one difficult, but with a little more trying, I think I got something?annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-56825426524497020742011-05-30T18:43:23.443-06:002011-05-30T18:43:23.443-06:00~Tilly, Thank you for stopping by and commneting. ...~Tilly, Thank you for stopping by and commneting. I'm glad you liked the wordle.<br /><br />~Viv, Thank you for your compliments. And yes, when the words take over it makes our jobs easier, and fun!<br /><br />~Traci B., I like yours, too. Thanks.<br /><br />~Barbara, Doi...I didn't even notice, but might pull out the like. Not sure on that. Thanks for your comments. <br /><br />~brenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-37558398558609245522011-05-30T16:29:35.045-06:002011-05-30T16:29:35.045-06:00We're all made from the stuff of planets and m...We're all made from the stuff of planets and meteors, so it's a calling back to our true selves :). I like the sense you've captured of yearning for rebirth.Francis Scudellarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01008685302028451297noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-34576548281607528342011-05-30T15:38:31.594-06:002011-05-30T15:38:31.594-06:00I like the whole planet thing but the title is my ...I like the whole planet thing but the title is my favourite line.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-16667308395540829942011-05-30T14:03:08.720-06:002011-05-30T14:03:08.720-06:00I love everything about this poem, Brenda! Great t...I love everything about this poem, Brenda! Great title ... and "winding life with leaves" is spectacular! Your second stanza really resonates with me.Mariannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17734900426632493796noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-28606490145238577302011-05-30T13:48:35.228-06:002011-05-30T13:48:35.228-06:00I like the way you use her planet-ness.. The firs...I like the way you use her planet-ness.. The first time, IS, the second, LIKE. <br />And dreaming herself a meteor. A planet person could easily tire of being dependable.barbarahttp://briarcat.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-77325755324788053122011-05-30T10:49:24.257-06:002011-05-30T10:49:24.257-06:00Vibrant and poignant at the same time. Great poem...Vibrant and poignant at the same time. Great poem, Brenda.Traci Bhttp://poemflow.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-82627538110137372732011-05-30T05:18:31.675-06:002011-05-30T05:18:31.675-06:00Isn't it wonderful when a poem takes over, dic...Isn't it wonderful when a poem takes over, dictating its path to the poet? I love this one, and your use of alliteration is not too much, not too little, but just rightAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-61474679203771064602011-05-30T01:29:34.504-06:002011-05-30T01:29:34.504-06:00Brenda, this is a lovely poem from a great wordle....Brenda, this is a lovely poem from a great wordle.<br /><br />I love the last two lines. They say so much, so simply.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-41601069448143189562011-05-29T19:20:30.995-06:002011-05-29T19:20:30.995-06:00~Laurie, Thank you for stopping and commenting. T...~Laurie, Thank you for stopping and commenting. The first stanza reminds me of Steven's piece more than the rest of it. I really love his piece...<br />~Isabel, Thank you for stopping by, it's nice to see you again.<br />~Elizabeth, Your comments illuminate ideas in my work that I wake me up. I love having you amongst my blog friends. When summer begins to calm my life again, I will brenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-29240710109030236842011-05-29T18:20:29.938-06:002011-05-29T18:20:29.938-06:00A meteor. Like it. Clever use of the words.A meteor. Like it. Clever use of the words.Henry Clemmonshttp://henryclemmonspoet.blogspot.com/2011/05/below-haze-wordle-6.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-69540209727866637872011-05-29T14:56:52.038-06:002011-05-29T14:56:52.038-06:00Like this one Brenda. It has a sense of mystery to...Like this one Brenda. It has a sense of mystery to it, yet feels somehow familiar. Not because of the wordle words, but the image in the second stanza. You took this one out into the Universe, yet somehow kept it private and personal. I am really beginning to like the wordles. You might want to come take a look at the Tuesday Collabs we are doing at the <br />http://Elizabethhttp://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-50605829624674110202011-05-29T13:49:36.994-06:002011-05-29T13:49:36.994-06:00lovely imagery, great poemlovely imagery, great poemIsabelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16630181168510791132noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-6999237624458222462011-05-29T13:08:38.166-06:002011-05-29T13:08:38.166-06:00Powerful, Brenda... I especially like the first ve...Powerful, Brenda... I especially like the first verse!Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-758121992050979152011-05-29T13:05:28.396-06:002011-05-29T13:05:28.396-06:00~Lucychili, I feel that, too.
~Mary, That's my...~Lucychili, I feel that, too.<br />~Mary, That's my favorite line, too. Well that and the title, which just popped into thought.<br />~Fireblossom, I love to see your colors here, and am pleased you like the poem.<br />~angie, That is likely where that line came from...round and round like a teacher, ha! Yes, the angels revisited yellow. Thanks for your words. <br />~Pamela, Thank you. I brenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-40943756253685779432011-05-29T11:54:41.837-06:002011-05-29T11:54:41.837-06:00Wow! The words worked beautifully in this piece. N...Wow! The words worked beautifully in this piece. Nice work.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-44558069552090030532011-05-29T10:25:04.058-06:002011-05-29T10:25:04.058-06:00she sounds like a teacher, round and round she goe...she sounds like a teacher, round and round she goes!!<br />:D<br /><br />I love it, the whole planet-thing fascinates me. love the angels coming back, too, with their yellow fields. I hope she finds her meteor.angiehttp://therer2doors.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-20330610201819171242011-05-29T08:38:38.598-06:002011-05-29T08:38:38.598-06:00I am loving that title and the poem you made from ...I am loving that title and the poem you made from it.<br /><br />Thanks for the "midnight ride" through my comments this morning, lol. They ARE coming. Geez.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-80945109780596741002011-05-29T06:37:59.534-06:002011-05-29T06:37:59.534-06:00The second stanza is my favorite, Brenda. I just l...The second stanza is my favorite, Brenda. I just love 'she dreams herself a meteor.'Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-15662190110202510202011-05-28T21:12:10.594-06:002011-05-28T21:12:10.594-06:00wistfulwistfullucychilihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06519163424062626658noreply@blogger.com