tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post7983310430890248518..comments2023-10-10T10:41:08.501-06:00Comments on Beyond the Bozone: Ghazaling Nowsbrenda whttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-31394270365745049952010-06-03T20:27:28.994-06:002010-06-03T20:27:28.994-06:00I liked the Ghazal.
sky as the canvas of my thoug...I liked the Ghazal.<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2010/05/sky-as-my-canvas-of-thoughts.html" rel="nofollow">sky as the canvas of my thoughts</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-76746285304910972602010-06-02T16:29:51.245-06:002010-06-02T16:29:51.245-06:00Dina-thanks for your comments--I channeled this pi...Dina-thanks for your comments--I channeled this piece keeping in mind a Buddhist perspective. (validation...(which the buddhist doesn't seek)...is mine!) hee hee<br /><br />Stan...I've been trying to escape duality since my first "trip" in the late 70s. While that trip opened up the idea of oneness...proving it and feeling it on every drug free day? Whole 'nother story. <brenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-33915843768305975592010-06-02T10:54:55.681-06:002010-06-02T10:54:55.681-06:00I love the sound AND should follow the advice. I ...I love the sound AND should follow the advice. I have the attention span of a flea and can forget about washing the dishes in mid-swipe! <br /><br />The ghazal is a very interesting form. I will copy the pattern and give it a try.<br /><br />bEarlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07006011649052459501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-37911818906351125452010-06-01T10:24:41.270-06:002010-06-01T10:24:41.270-06:00I love the sound of this read out loud, Brenda. I...I love the sound of this read out loud, Brenda. It flows steady and quietly. It reminds me of the Buddhist ideas of less hubbub multi-tasking, more presence here, now. I especially like your reference to weeding, as that's my personal quiet place where I think of nothing, easily.<br /><br />- DinaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-18469706809706201922010-06-01T00:50:08.650-06:002010-06-01T00:50:08.650-06:00This works very well, I like it lots, and the form...This works very well, I like it lots, and the form is interesting.<br /><br />'Enchantment flips a penny' is great...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-79549760250822127382010-05-31T17:37:19.916-06:002010-05-31T17:37:19.916-06:00Difficult to escape duality.
Thoughtful post.Difficult to escape duality.<br />Thoughtful post.Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.com