tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post6857144967817663435..comments2023-10-10T10:41:08.501-06:00Comments on Beyond the Bozone: a string of pikubrenda whttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-29109352048208749462016-08-09T04:16:29.408-06:002016-08-09T04:16:29.408-06:00Interesting, I like the equals sign dotted all the...Interesting, I like the equals sign dotted all the way through, what was the intended effect of this? Somerset Wedding Girlhttp://www.holbrookhouse.co.uk/weddingsnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-64348065192198621492011-06-04T09:09:37.269-06:002011-06-04T09:09:37.269-06:00As Poets United reaches its first anniversary this...As Poets United reaches its first anniversary this coming week we want to thank you for your support. Over the past year we have grown to 250 members plus and are steadily growing. Poets United is proud to have you as one of our members and look forward to another successful year. You imagination, creativity and willingness to share with us is what makes our community such a wonderful place.Poets Unitedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14470198264008339228noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-66579528430492739962011-06-01T14:49:55.812-06:002011-06-01T14:49:55.812-06:00nicely done Brenda.....I couldnt get into this for...nicely done Brenda.....I couldnt get into this form.....you certainly did wellWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-1506202646361222842011-06-01T10:32:12.826-06:002011-06-01T10:32:12.826-06:00Brenda, I like how these turned out.
PamelaBrenda, I like how these turned out. <br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-36206795409750120642011-06-01T09:48:39.261-06:002011-06-01T09:48:39.261-06:00Brenda, I like your take on the linked pikus, retu...Brenda, I like your take on the linked pikus, returning to that same end word, except for the last stanza, where it stands forth in the middle. (My punning self now wants to write piku using wind and wound).Mr. Walkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05507517064398624652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-36902136119776582372011-06-01T08:04:57.732-06:002011-06-01T08:04:57.732-06:00Intriguing connection between these pikus. Well wr...Intriguing connection between these pikus. Well written!Elizabeth Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00681448814813694801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-58080935471129326132011-06-01T07:44:01.383-06:002011-06-01T07:44:01.383-06:00I like your piku.
In one aspect, your piku remin...I like your piku. <br /><br />In one aspect, your piku remind me of ghazals...especially the first three in which you retained the ending rhyming word, "wind". Then there is a shift...the wind stops being the thing acted out/through/against by the subjects in the first three piku and then is clearly pointed out as the offender in the fourth piku. <br /><br />-NicoleAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-68972122046087190552011-06-01T07:21:54.673-06:002011-06-01T07:21:54.673-06:00I like the variety of meanings you have given to y...I like the variety of meanings you have given to your piku - I am too one-track-minded!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-69165093691717591372011-06-01T05:56:01.844-06:002011-06-01T05:56:01.844-06:00Well done! I prefer your style of piku, with shif...Well done! I prefer your style of piku, with shifts in meaning more than rhyme. Still, I agree it was a very fun exercise.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-63814031063178261382011-06-01T05:32:14.809-06:002011-06-01T05:32:14.809-06:00Lovely blog. Do visit my blog and leave your footp...Lovely blog. Do visit my blog and leave your footprints by posting comments<br /><br />http://parentingworkshop.blogspot.com/<br />http://fun-with-mails.blogspot.com/Niloferhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05045590705853352139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-31045037570076770722011-06-01T04:32:11.482-06:002011-06-01T04:32:11.482-06:00Intriguing. Might have a go at this.Intriguing. Might have a go at this.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-58225641582409218252011-06-01T03:19:17.574-06:002011-06-01T03:19:17.574-06:00Well done, Brenda. I had such fun with the form, ...Well done, Brenda. I had such fun with the form, and I sense you did too. The third is, sadly, so true this year.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.com