tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post6388377835021066630..comments2023-10-10T10:41:08.501-06:00Comments on Beyond the Bozone: cagedbrenda whttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-26772722972368250802010-07-26T07:40:28.318-06:002010-07-26T07:40:28.318-06:00I love it!! A beautiful poem about freedom...done ...I love it!! A beautiful poem about freedom...done eloquently. Awesome poetry prompt! :-)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-66753501077503210262010-07-24T06:58:21.637-06:002010-07-24T06:58:21.637-06:00Very fine poem, Brenda. My heart goes out to the ...Very fine poem, Brenda. My heart goes out to the caged birds!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-12541178886464607062010-07-23T19:51:04.155-06:002010-07-23T19:51:04.155-06:00Fun and interesting! Freedom is the word and every...Fun and interesting! Freedom is the word and everyone have the right to get it, and that will include animals as well:D Thank for sharing!:PAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-1078332925420991882010-07-23T18:08:18.367-06:002010-07-23T18:08:18.367-06:00Wonderful piece...yes, I agree, wild animals belon...Wonderful piece...yes, I agree, wild animals belong in the wild where they feel comfortable...we ask the same for ourselves...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-23172646707075745362010-07-23T10:26:50.445-06:002010-07-23T10:26:50.445-06:00Robert- I feel guilt, too, obviously, I guess. I...Robert- I feel guilt, too, obviously, I guess. It's hard not to, Sophia runs across her cage, wings outstretched...testing them. She lets herself in and out of her cage. Other critters in the house realize that she is the boss. Thanks for your comments.<br /><br />Pamela- Your rescued dog is blessed to have landed with you. Never apologize for going on and on. I like to hear other brenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-35560761349696154512010-07-23T10:18:58.091-06:002010-07-23T10:18:58.091-06:00Brenda this beautiful and sad at the same time!
We...Brenda this beautiful and sad at the same time!<br />We have a loro parrot because my husband wanted him. I had never owned a bird until we got him four years ago and he is delightful when music is on and he just sings along! I honestly never saw such disregard for animals until I came to Mexico. The people in Oaxaca think one way only and that is if the animals does not work then it is of no useflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-58448056753179456412010-07-23T09:54:27.381-06:002010-07-23T09:54:27.381-06:00How can beauty be so sad? Your poem paints a gorg...How can beauty be so sad? Your poem paints a gorgeous picture that comes from an awful price. Its almost a guilty read for me. I love the flow and the color and the wonderful description of sounds and then I feel sad knowing at the reason it has come to be is because of society’s ignorance and selfishness. You did a wonderful job with such a sad subject. Thank you for sharing.Robert Lloydhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09536151998025229196noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-69749874867338939422010-07-23T08:59:22.617-06:002010-07-23T08:59:22.617-06:00Oodozo, Nice to see you here...thanks for your com...Oodozo, Nice to see you here...thanks for your comments. Sadly, if we released either of our macaws they would die. They've lived the life oh human pets...<br /><br />Jingle..glad you like the repetition.brenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-86100080358735820402010-07-22T20:46:26.524-06:002010-07-22T20:46:26.524-06:00the repetition of the words are fun to read.
lovel...the repetition of the words are fun to read.<br />lovely poem about sound!Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-77774802737305516012010-07-22T14:55:01.852-06:002010-07-22T14:55:01.852-06:00I like and appreciate the poem in a bittersweet wa...I like and appreciate the poem in a bittersweet way. Sadly, many people get parrots, as well as other animals, merely for the novelty of owning somthing exotic. I would rather rescue and release them.00dozohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05704098179400766578noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-81136586274438529472010-07-22T14:16:27.990-06:002010-07-22T14:16:27.990-06:00I agree Weasel...this poem makes me sad. Maybe I ...I agree Weasel...this poem makes me sad. Maybe I won't read it again. ha! <br />Gordon--the second stanza is my favorite. It's Sophia's whispers that bring some relief from my guilt at being her captor.brenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-25755060229162144082010-07-22T14:01:58.136-06:002010-07-22T14:01:58.136-06:00Brenda, I'm just reading the poem not the expl...Brenda, I'm just reading the poem not the explanation etc. As a poem, I like the repetitive names in the first lines of the stanzas, the lines "I love you smooth as rain<br />that slides down glass", and the images of John and his actions.Gordon Masonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11405099521661854141noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-40645599278468036472010-07-22T12:07:33.518-06:002010-07-22T12:07:33.518-06:00It is sad, how many unwanted animals there are in ...It is sad, how many unwanted animals there are in this world. I adopted my dog five years ago, from the SPCA. An elderly couple didn't want him anymore, so the SPCA kept him, but he was already 5 years old (which is the age limit for them to be put down if they are not adopted by that age). We adopted him the day before he was going to be put to sleep, and he is the best dog in the world. A Weaselhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12467584502095433332noreply@blogger.com