tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post5263260094762449555..comments2023-10-10T10:41:08.501-06:00Comments on Beyond the Bozone: untitledbrenda whttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-46082701892636365422011-02-11T08:42:32.951-07:002011-02-11T08:42:32.951-07:00So well written for the prompt and thoroughly enjo...So well written for the prompt and thoroughly enjoyed by this reader. <br />Illuminate the ruse of guile.<br />Rise to the day’s remains,<br />splinter trickery from self,<br />and welcome authenticity.<br />Loved these final lines!Gloriahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08555391165844772063noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-39404905008397808872011-02-11T08:33:06.241-07:002011-02-11T08:33:06.241-07:00I especially loved the last three lines, the rhyth...I especially loved the last three lines, the rhythm and the word choice. And it's totally happened to me before as well, being at a loss for a title. Hope you'll find the perfect one!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-13687839976315768902011-02-05T16:42:56.532-07:002011-02-05T16:42:56.532-07:00A title evades me, but the words are beautifully w...A title evades me, but the words are beautifully written.Roanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01841824351740989301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-6184689840081896332011-02-05T13:14:00.395-07:002011-02-05T13:14:00.395-07:00Thank you for your comments, I'm glad you all ...Thank you for your comments, I'm glad you all like it. I want to reread it too, Viv. I wasn't sure, but as the writing itself becomes more distant, I like it more.brenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-54221159909247461232011-02-05T12:48:15.784-07:002011-02-05T12:48:15.784-07:00Some beautifully co structed li =nes here, Brenda....Some beautifully co structed li =nes here, Brenda. Worth coming back for a re-read.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-11917982775637800132011-02-05T11:54:42.361-07:002011-02-05T11:54:42.361-07:00A very beautifully, if not a bit
bittersweet take ...A very beautifully, if not a bit<br />bittersweet take on the prompt Brenda.<br />Nice to see a poem.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-16019982050361817752011-02-05T10:52:38.203-07:002011-02-05T10:52:38.203-07:00beautifulbeautifulalvinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03001774554427298882noreply@blogger.com