tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post4552832403576365871..comments2023-10-10T10:41:08.501-06:00Comments on Beyond the Bozone: NaPoWriMo 27 ~ Language is a Virusbrenda whttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-62744275700064247372011-04-27T21:52:59.685-06:002011-04-27T21:52:59.685-06:00Brenda...after multiple reads, I couldn't deci...Brenda...after multiple reads, I couldn't decide on which line "did it for me"....they all fit together so well, I couldn't pick! Well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-50965676642404353882011-04-27T19:18:27.367-06:002011-04-27T19:18:27.367-06:00"talk and smoke / dust to dust" haunts m..."talk and smoke / dust to dust" haunts me - that talk is like smoke. The spareness of the language is heady - open to interpretation - and yet well conveying your feeling of loss. I'm sorry for the loss of your friend.Mr. Walkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05507517064398624652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-57022508280159945372011-04-27T17:27:10.017-06:002011-04-27T17:27:10.017-06:00Very moving words-- a sad tributeVery moving words-- a sad tributeLindahttp://word-painting.blogspot.com/2011/04/in-middle-of-life.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-81342182974808210672011-04-27T15:40:11.412-06:002011-04-27T15:40:11.412-06:00I like the way this process works, a kind of shuff...I like the way this process works, a kind of shuffled memory, perhaps. A cool tribute to your friend.Andy Sewinahttp://sewina.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-48359115348499510832011-04-27T12:21:33.935-06:002011-04-27T12:21:33.935-06:00Brenda, I'm so sorry for your loss, for so man...Brenda, I'm so sorry for your loss, for so many losses in this ridiculous, pointless, endless war. Your images are sharp; your final words give the poem life.<br /><br />Amy<br />http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/04/27/carradine-vs-laughlin-0-1/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-11062237339472291642011-04-27T09:00:50.964-06:002011-04-27T09:00:50.964-06:00I love how you arrived at this piece, Brenda. Thou...I love how you arrived at this piece, Brenda. Though a very sad subject, it is a moving poem. <br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-37121873032212737162011-04-27T08:34:58.183-06:002011-04-27T08:34:58.183-06:00You got it right first time... just as well... :)You got it right first time... just as well... :)Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-22580082241344519212011-04-27T08:04:52.589-06:002011-04-27T08:04:52.589-06:00yes it could be usyes it could be uslucychilihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06519163424062626658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-30356839446054932892011-04-27T06:46:47.336-06:002011-04-27T06:46:47.336-06:00A moving piece of writing, Brenda, which had me re...A moving piece of writing, Brenda, which had me rereading. Makes me realize we never know when there will be no next time......Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-58093216763448604382011-04-27T05:25:45.261-06:002011-04-27T05:25:45.261-06:00Very intense words. I especially like: "dissi...Very intense words. I especially like: "dissipate down eternity’s highway."Mariannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17734900426632493796noreply@blogger.com