tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post4318321964652204881..comments2023-10-10T10:41:08.501-06:00Comments on Beyond the Bozone: for the children & Step up Non Believersbrenda whttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-71884586450136983772010-07-23T16:09:49.793-06:002010-07-23T16:09:49.793-06:00Neil, Thanks for your comments. You are bolsterin...Neil, Thanks for your comments. You are bolstering my desire to try more pieces like this. I did send "for the children" to one of the Gulf sites....I'll let you know if I hear anything. <br /><br />Your support feels good. I'm happy that you stopped by to read and comment!<br />~Brendabrenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-2950895317847493842010-07-22T01:58:43.828-06:002010-07-22T01:58:43.828-06:00All good, all good! Two excellent poems here.
&q...All good, all good! Two excellent poems here.<br /><br />"For the Children" makes a strong statement without getting all "blue". More potent that way I think, allowing the meaning to be more received. Besides having simply great images! Hope also that you submit that poem to either or both of the Gulf sites listed at WWP. Please please do!<br /><br />"Step up Non neil reidhttp://bearlyaudible.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-63664627551635486202010-07-21T21:31:19.227-06:002010-07-21T21:31:19.227-06:00@Barbara-If the music is wordless and instrumental...@Barbara-If the music is wordless and instrumental (not electronic!) I love to listen when I write. Words are too distracting. Thanks for the spiders and mandolin comment. I like the image, too.<br />@Guatami-Thank you for your comments. I enjoyed your post a great deal this week. (you all should check it out if you haven't!)<br />@Stan-Thanks--I'm glad it took you somewhere.<br />@brenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-74715488418551110792010-07-21T20:34:50.172-06:002010-07-21T20:34:50.172-06:00Hi Brenda -- what I love about reading other poets...Hi Brenda -- what I love about reading other poets' works is the process...some poets don't share, and others -- like you -- take me to places I might never think about. I think you're the first person outside Stan who really edited your 'automatic writing,' and I was enthralled with your process. Lovely, but my fave is the first one. I'll have the image of the hives and Linda Goinhttp://lindagoin.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-50054996778887570272010-07-21T20:06:46.839-06:002010-07-21T20:06:46.839-06:00i enjoyed both...great poems...and got a little in...i enjoyed both...great poems...and got a little inspiration too:)hope u don't mind...thank u for stopping by my blog:)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-5593126806527219992010-07-21T20:05:33.049-06:002010-07-21T20:05:33.049-06:00Random, abstract thought transforms to very readab...Random, abstract thought transforms to very readable poetry, provoking, as it should, further thought...Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-51031322545060710312010-07-21T11:19:19.707-06:002010-07-21T11:19:19.707-06:00Truly great pieces!
like an automataTruly great pieces!<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2010/07/like-automata.html" rel="nofollow">like an automata</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-56603620782707230952010-07-21T10:55:43.542-06:002010-07-21T10:55:43.542-06:00No way can I write and listen at the same time. I...No way can I write and listen at the same time. I do like your choice of music. I like the idea of spiders with mandolins--the shape's about right.<br />That's a great title on the second piece.barbarahttp://briarcat.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-70366571472763237082010-07-21T10:24:44.021-06:002010-07-21T10:24:44.021-06:00Rob, C.R., and Pamela- Thanks for stopping by and ...Rob, C.R., and Pamela- Thanks for stopping by and commenting. This prompt has been one of my favorites. It's interesting to see where you wind up!brenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-4637703500366902172010-07-21T10:22:22.482-06:002010-07-21T10:22:22.482-06:00Brenda I like where this took you! Nice!
PamelaBrenda I like where this took you! Nice!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-14626632178355465542010-07-21T10:14:15.616-06:002010-07-21T10:14:15.616-06:00Both reads are interesting enjoyed them both. Than...Both reads are interesting enjoyed them both. Thanks for sharing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-79270048259833968132010-07-21T10:13:45.738-06:002010-07-21T10:13:45.738-06:00I really liked both of these Brenda, especially th...I really liked both of these Brenda, especially the fantastical essence of the second piece... good stuff...<br /><br />...robrob kistnerhttp://image-verse.com/streamnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-45868487400595239722010-07-21T08:07:20.731-06:002010-07-21T08:07:20.731-06:00Thanks Derrick!Thanks Derrick!brenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-22362056842280407552010-07-21T08:02:56.389-06:002010-07-21T08:02:56.389-06:00I think both of these are great!I think both of these are great!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00861397533660827678noreply@blogger.com