tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post3919230384429511397..comments2023-10-10T10:41:08.501-06:00Comments on Beyond the Bozone: be present in your lifebrenda whttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-85025713185013074662010-07-29T19:32:30.236-06:002010-07-29T19:32:30.236-06:00Such a beautiful message! :-)Such a beautiful message! :-)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-21465660264018918402010-07-28T20:44:31.228-06:002010-07-28T20:44:31.228-06:00(I think blogger ate my first comment.)
I like Tom...(I think blogger ate my first comment.)<br />I like Tomorrow best. <br />I'd probably agree with Jinksy. Maybe if you wove them in together, or if the second half mirrored the first in some way, or more obviously complemented it...barbarahttp://briarcat.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-64377325587827538032010-07-28T17:58:09.755-06:002010-07-28T17:58:09.755-06:00Brenda, your poem is inspired and right on target....Brenda, your poem is inspired and right on target. I love how you describr today! And the last stanza is...just right.Diane Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15886778060199433214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-73794218287494693602010-07-28T16:51:44.654-06:002010-07-28T16:51:44.654-06:00nicly done Brenda.....thanks for sharing thisnicly done Brenda.....thanks for sharing thisWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-81879251169512615442010-07-28T16:49:00.207-06:002010-07-28T16:49:00.207-06:00Yes—it works so well that I'm not aware of the...Yes—it works so well that I'm not aware of the parsing of time into past, present and future.Lindahttp://word-painting.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-30701642627038581942010-07-28T16:48:46.296-06:002010-07-28T16:48:46.296-06:00Yes—it works so well that I'm not aware of the...Yes—it works so well that I'm not aware of the parsing of time into past, present and future.Lindahttp://word-painting.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-41476449741080058532010-07-28T16:40:22.996-06:002010-07-28T16:40:22.996-06:00Brenda, just beautiful and also throught-provoking...Brenda, just beautiful and also throught-provoking. I love the idea of being the change you want to see in the world.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-16809393411061137752010-07-28T16:39:12.268-06:002010-07-28T16:39:12.268-06:00Surely worth to be printed and kept throughout tim...Surely worth to be printed and kept throughout time. Impressed ! Please have a great Thursday.<br /><br /><a href="http://tagein-tagaus-athen.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">daily athens </a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-62645848554948845952010-07-28T12:08:51.805-06:002010-07-28T12:08:51.805-06:00Glad you like it Pamela. Thanks.
Derrick, Right y...Glad you like it Pamela. Thanks.<br /><br />Derrick, Right you are.<br /><br />Jinksy--Maybe that's it. That is how it started...it just seemed so sparse. So I added the rest and the title. Thanks for your thoughts.<br /><br />What do the rest of you think? ~Brendabrenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-68540773916825163302010-07-28T12:05:11.328-06:002010-07-28T12:05:11.328-06:00I'd be tempted to leave the first three stanza...I'd be tempted to leave the first three stanzas as a one whole,(they work so well), then separate the rest into a second offering?Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-28524865560119635652010-07-28T10:23:48.823-06:002010-07-28T10:23:48.823-06:00What better way than to be present in the present?...What better way than to be present in the present?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00861397533660827678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-998107409226994652010-07-28T10:04:24.155-06:002010-07-28T10:04:24.155-06:00Brenda I love the message here
Lovely!
PamelaBrenda I love the message here<br />Lovely!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.com