tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post2193932977438655750..comments2023-10-10T10:41:08.501-06:00Comments on Beyond the Bozone: to the floodsbrenda whttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-42033530096395221362011-06-02T10:50:16.548-06:002011-06-02T10:50:16.548-06:00Brenda, hang in there. The school year's almos...Brenda, hang in there. The school year's almost over for you. Loved "the river's sisters / drop grey sky / onto Earth."<br /><br />RichardMr. Walkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05507517064398624652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-13182081607343015642011-06-02T01:57:24.464-06:002011-06-02T01:57:24.464-06:00as the river’s sisters
drop grey sky
onto Earth
B...as the river’s sisters<br />drop grey sky<br />onto Earth<br /><br />Beautiful view of rain...Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-45525223643420467802011-06-01T00:50:46.002-06:002011-06-01T00:50:46.002-06:00the shimmering heat
rises from my dark pavement
ni...the shimmering heat<br />rises from my dark pavement<br />night brings no relief<br /><br />I hope things dry out for you, and that the days before school's end go smoothly!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-48504744276617166722011-05-30T01:35:26.246-06:002011-05-30T01:35:26.246-06:00Beautifully done.
Anna :o]Beautifully done.<br /><br />Anna :o]Anna :o]http://puzzelicious.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-47593753678399037582011-05-29T15:50:02.784-06:002011-05-29T15:50:02.784-06:00I like the mystery of this poem about flooding and...I like the mystery of this poem about flooding and water. Surprised to hear that Montana is flooding. I feel very spoiled by our S Calif weather. Some call if boring but I love it. Anyway I like your poem very much.Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-41038374696418021742011-05-29T11:50:45.799-06:002011-05-29T11:50:45.799-06:00Brenda, the weather this year is horrendous. Floo...Brenda, the weather this year is horrendous. Floods. Tornadoes. Other major storms. This is the worst year I can remember. Your poem really captures the essence of 'flood.'Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-80519834821410783622011-05-28T06:52:32.456-06:002011-05-28T06:52:32.456-06:00This is really eerie. Well done!This is really eerie. Well done!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-36425525433748967632011-05-27T21:42:28.431-06:002011-05-27T21:42:28.431-06:00here it is cold
grey skies
and steamy breath
an a...here it is cold<br />grey skies <br />and steamy breath<br />an amazing worldlucychilihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06519163424062626658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-72641357848613763122011-05-27T18:51:11.350-06:002011-05-27T18:51:11.350-06:00Wow, Pamela, I hope you get some relief from the h...Wow, Pamela, I hope you get some relief from the heat. My home is safe from flooding, and I don't plan to travel this weekend. <br />I think many people across the states are longing for summer and heat. We in Montana haven't had a good heating up, yet. It's snowing in some parts of the state. I'm happy for the three day weekend. Then only four days and school is out. <br /> <brenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-79027790061875457972011-05-27T18:38:03.646-06:002011-05-27T18:38:03.646-06:00Well penned, Brenda. Please stay safe, my friend. ...Well penned, Brenda. Please stay safe, my friend. The weather is unbearably hot right now, not the usual for here. No rain, just loads of heat. It was 89 here today, unheard of.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.com