tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post1534925947814794632..comments2023-10-10T10:41:08.501-06:00Comments on Beyond the Bozone: currents of mythbrenda whttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-37631464092457986302010-07-20T07:57:52.894-06:002010-07-20T07:57:52.894-06:00what a joy to read!what a joy to read!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-22161514698704472612010-07-19T20:16:13.732-06:002010-07-19T20:16:13.732-06:00LOVED the wordplay here! Was totally reminded of t...LOVED the wordplay here! Was totally reminded of the Harry Potter series - myth fused with reality.<br />I had once written a <a href="http://kavisionz.wordpress.com/2010/03/11/fused-in-space/" rel="nofollow">piece</a> (very prosaic ofcourse) on somewhat similar lines.. <br /><br />Thoroughly enjoyed your poem!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-27804660269297141492010-07-19T18:39:56.378-06:002010-07-19T18:39:56.378-06:00Great poem. I didn't know they all had names f...Great poem. I didn't know they all had names for their forms. You learn something new every day.Sue Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15864986500627496240noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-85901760439867725432010-07-19T17:50:32.005-06:002010-07-19T17:50:32.005-06:00Ah, the fascinating phoenix in a fabulous form! F...Ah, the fascinating phoenix in a fabulous form! Felicitations!~T~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17969562036638831748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-31232535524806644072010-07-19T13:58:11.394-06:002010-07-19T13:58:11.394-06:00Terrific form! The Phoenix is my favorite myth and...Terrific form! The Phoenix is my favorite myth and you've surely written a great read!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-19404818149476560032010-07-19T10:20:29.745-06:002010-07-19T10:20:29.745-06:00Thank you to everyone for your comments. This was...Thank you to everyone for your comments. This was a fun piece to write, it took some time, but I like the results, too. <br /><br />Your kind words make a difference in my day, thanks again!brenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-70208635767308142422010-07-19T09:52:05.309-06:002010-07-19T09:52:05.309-06:00oh wonderful form...have never tried this one..lov...oh wonderful form...have never tried this one..loved the imagery of the pheonix as well...nice magpie!Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-27228531655890357792010-07-18T09:58:03.110-06:002010-07-18T09:58:03.110-06:00That firey phoenix...you've portrayed him beau...That firey phoenix...you've portrayed him beautifully here!Helenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13447013188405986054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-56418578568403342792010-07-18T08:47:13.969-06:002010-07-18T08:47:13.969-06:00Fun form and great imagery. great fan of using the...Fun form and great imagery. great fan of using the word panache! Awesome!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-38932616035571282922010-07-18T08:44:04.048-06:002010-07-18T08:44:04.048-06:00Magical, beautifully written. :)Magical, beautifully written. :)RAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17922537526607315266noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-73380818130289505112010-07-18T07:59:18.483-06:002010-07-18T07:59:18.483-06:00I am impressed! The phoenix was a childhood fasci...I am impressed! The phoenix was a childhood fascination of mine. Absolutely brilliant poem.Angie Muresanhttp://www.angiemuresan.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-29090941698628199672010-07-17T18:20:32.037-06:002010-07-17T18:20:32.037-06:00The amazing Phoenix bird always rises from the ash...The amazing Phoenix bird always rises from the ashes and he's usually hotter than . . .<br /><br />At least the one 80 miles from me!<br /><br />Beautifully written, BrendaCatalysthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03804837416104556928noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-29154051710006353372010-07-17T15:13:07.204-06:002010-07-17T15:13:07.204-06:00Nice taking it that one step more and challenging ...Nice taking it that one step more and challenging yourself with a new form, Brenda... the lyrics of Sinead O'Connor' "Troy", "the phoenix from the flame" is now ringing through my ears...<br /><br />- DinaDina Spicehttp://mypoeticlicense.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-3908112436690864802010-07-17T15:03:27.739-06:002010-07-17T15:03:27.739-06:00Well done! I love the phoenix approach.Well done! I love the phoenix approach.Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-27369318158599097092010-07-17T12:44:03.341-06:002010-07-17T12:44:03.341-06:00Brenda W. I love this piece your words and images...Brenda W. I love this piece your words and images are wonderful... I do love myth and your did an exquisite job of protraying the phoenix here...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-86447592179493702772010-07-17T10:57:19.077-06:002010-07-17T10:57:19.077-06:00Not an easy task ... you managed it beautifully!Not an easy task ... you managed it beautifully!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-790472491517238382010-07-17T10:24:55.536-06:002010-07-17T10:24:55.536-06:00my hat off to youmy hat off to youSuzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10329289442910294160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-54322174193104920942010-07-17T09:52:48.825-06:002010-07-17T09:52:48.825-06:00Great post! A very enjoyable read and a wonderful ...Great post! A very enjoyable read and a wonderful take on the prompt! <br /><br />-WeaselWeaselhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12467584502095433332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-75595982998937883002010-07-17T08:43:18.260-06:002010-07-17T08:43:18.260-06:00great poem! I've always loved the Phoenix.great poem! I've always loved the Phoenix.Kathe W.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06781645436343424010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-56132888460839184472010-07-17T07:10:02.382-06:002010-07-17T07:10:02.382-06:00Thanks Oodozo!
Steveroni, Interesting that you c...Thanks Oodozo! <br />Steveroni, Interesting that you compare poetic form with musical form. I like the comparison. Thanks for stopping by!<br />Derrick--I'm glad you like the piece!brenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-76260811271843176872010-07-17T00:11:37.946-06:002010-07-17T00:11:37.946-06:00Had to look at this after seeing your comment to R...Had to look at this after seeing your comment to Rall. Super poem! I love the mystical subject. Great take from the image.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00861397533660827678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-54396276253782748232010-07-16T21:27:58.986-06:002010-07-16T21:27:58.986-06:00DAMMM! I wuz just getting to be able to follow th...DAMMM! I wuz just getting to be able to follow the first four rules of MAGPIE...and now you're throwing iambic pentameter stuff around here--grin! Actually I LOVE form--classical musician--but have trouble putting words into it.<br /><br />Beautifully done post, Brendasteveronihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17498524940140288735noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-2497904882372341112010-07-16T21:00:45.611-06:002010-07-16T21:00:45.611-06:00Nicely done!Nicely done!00dozohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05704098179400766578noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-67816906068293658052010-07-16T19:55:32.361-06:002010-07-16T19:55:32.361-06:00I was hoping you would, Rall. Let me know when yo...I was hoping you would, Rall. Let me know when you've penned something!brenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-53355682121699106442010-07-16T19:45:06.350-06:002010-07-16T19:45:06.350-06:00Well done Brenda, I must give this form a shot.Well done Brenda, I must give this form a shot.rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.com