tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post1004552886666083209..comments2023-10-10T10:41:08.501-06:00Comments on Beyond the Bozone: Side Show Freaksbrenda whttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-82119293453161739212010-05-09T15:33:10.317-06:002010-05-09T15:33:10.317-06:00ahhh the illustrated man comes to life again...who...ahhh the illustrated man comes to life again...who is more powerful the pen, the author or the breathing canvas with deep soulful eyes...one more believerhttp://pieceofpie.wordpress.com/2010/05/08/red-lips/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-18621178514141704822010-05-08T05:51:15.547-06:002010-05-08T05:51:15.547-06:00lovely and sad
beautiful pain
tragic fractallovely and sad<br />beautiful pain<br />tragic fractallucychilihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06519163424062626658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-40373927722826801502010-05-07T19:12:07.678-06:002010-05-07T19:12:07.678-06:00Feel like I've been to the Circus! Enjoyed re...Feel like I've been to the Circus! Enjoyed reading these!Joyce Ellen Davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13494251587598676788noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-79331902068171427342010-05-07T18:25:57.244-06:002010-05-07T18:25:57.244-06:00I really enjoyed these three rings: circus delight...I really enjoyed these three rings: circus delight.nanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03445777687088584603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-75645251283683260522010-05-07T17:16:40.211-06:002010-05-07T17:16:40.211-06:00Beautifully crafted tapestry of this interlaced ...Beautifully crafted tapestry of this interlaced trio. Delightful, delightful.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-70165209019535365932010-05-07T16:55:56.837-06:002010-05-07T16:55:56.837-06:00Bravo! I love your 3 ring circus of poetry! The po...Bravo! I love your 3 ring circus of poetry! The poems compliment each other beautifully. So many incredible images.Mariannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17734900426632493796noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-75392189978500427942010-05-07T15:24:38.842-06:002010-05-07T15:24:38.842-06:00Thank all of you for taking the time to read and c...Thank all of you for taking the time to read and comment. Your kindness makes my day. This is a fun ride. A big thank you to Big Tent Poetry for the prompt.brenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-23744146973963965012010-05-07T13:41:37.501-06:002010-05-07T13:41:37.501-06:00B- A very well written and well woven tale here. I...B- A very well written and well woven tale here. I fell the idea of love forever strengthened even though not reality. Thanks for sharing this excellent vision. - As others have said, I'd love to hear more. JackThe Emotional Orphanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03807420578349153992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-57505788468304201812010-05-07T13:02:35.863-06:002010-05-07T13:02:35.863-06:00You could turn this into a novel! Such a fun and ...You could turn this into a novel! Such a fun and interesting read...left me wanting more.Cynthia Shorthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12386358503730817278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-80194489745964188902010-05-07T12:51:58.014-06:002010-05-07T12:51:58.014-06:00The three interconnected pieces work really well, ...The three interconnected pieces work really well, as I found myself shifting focus back and forth between the them as if they were truly rings in a circus.Francis Scudellarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01008685302028451297noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-78409403301185317932010-05-07T12:43:51.690-06:002010-05-07T12:43:51.690-06:00wow! you've been busy! i love the idea of broa...wow! you've been busy! i love the idea of broadening the canvas. and how the series of pieces get more and more detailed as they unfurl. very nice.<br /><br />thanks for joining the circus! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-13723756096639574532010-05-07T12:00:22.975-06:002010-05-07T12:00:22.975-06:00This is a gorgeous series of poems. I especially l...This is a gorgeous series of poems. I especially love the distinct voices that each three characters have and the ways that stories twine together.Jessicahttp://everythingfeedsprocess.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-25719715025362863762010-05-07T10:30:24.234-06:002010-05-07T10:30:24.234-06:00What amazing details and insights! The mutual feak...What amazing details and insights! The mutual feakishness when caught in Lily's gaze. The Lovely Larinda's blasphemy of sequins, fearing death as she falls into it. The secrets, tantalizing titillations of Andy's needlework. This is a <i>tour de force</i>, Brenda!Paul Oakleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17426789386840488470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-41484490637665537792010-05-07T10:04:04.351-06:002010-05-07T10:04:04.351-06:00Fabulous! Love the three rings, repeated. The lang...Fabulous! Love the three rings, repeated. The language, of course, and stellar lines too rich to choose favorites from.<br /><br />Well played. Thanks for embracing the Big Tent!Debhttp://stoneymoss.org/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-23642329060002401822010-05-07T09:06:09.410-06:002010-05-07T09:06:09.410-06:00bwarren,
Beautifully woven tales you have written ...bwarren,<br />Beautifully woven tales you have written here. Enjoyed this very much.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876400310749659322.post-84976755950846986652010-05-07T08:19:27.959-06:002010-05-07T08:19:27.959-06:00I really enjoyed reading these intertwined tales. ...I really enjoyed reading these intertwined tales. There are some lovely lines quite apart from the alliteration:<br />'Lily is the lovely one. Stories spill/from her skin.'<br />'I blaspheme sequins'<br />'I lace/luscious stories to the/bodice of their skin.'<br /><br />The last line of "Lily" also is so true.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00861397533660827678noreply@blogger.com